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All Deviations
All Deviations


In the shadows my soul lies,
waiting to escape.
Held by rusted chains,
fighting to get free.
Screaming out into the blackness,
pleading to be heard.
With ever moment I lie alone,
a small part of me is torn away.
Thrust into the cold dead air,
I sail above a smoldering plain.
On a silent breeze,
I am secluded from the world.
So not to be recognized.
So not to be heard.
I bring this life upon myself.
I am the chains that restrain this decaying body.
I am the knife that tears at this flesh.
And I am the one who will finally cause my death.
©2006-2008 ~Beloved-Cyst
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Just a random peice i did a while ago
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~nemon25:iconnemon25: Nov 16, 2006, 2:26:47 PM Mood: Sadness
Sweet, you sound emo.....
:headbang:

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~Beloved-Cyst:iconBeloved-Cyst: Nov 17, 2006, 11:28:47 AM
lol... thanxs?

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~nemon25:iconnemon25: Nov 17, 2006, 2:45:54 PM Mood: Sadness
you are emo? or goth? or a normal chik?

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~Beloved-Cyst:iconBeloved-Cyst: Nov 17, 2006, 11:52:39 PM
i look goth... i am kinds kinky i guess.... but i am really just normel once you get to know me..... this poem is really old by the way lol

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~nemon25:iconnemon25: Nov 18, 2006, 3:48:22 PM Mood: Love
Hey, your still cute, no matter what!

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~hatredtheblack:iconhatredtheblack: Dec 2, 2006, 10:36:23 AM
Wow, I didn't know you wrote poetry! The subjec fold at the end is great, I like the personified/metaphorical link between you and the chains. It certainly suggests a lot more than questioning if you're 'EMO' or not.

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Take a look at my Sculptures.
Emotive Surrealism. You know you want it.
I also make Musicians, too.
~Beloved-Cyst:iconBeloved-Cyst: Dec 3, 2006, 1:44:54 AM
thank you... sooo much... finally someone sees the art in it... not just the imediate meaning... more the underneath beauty :)

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~hatredtheblack:iconhatredtheblack: Dec 4, 2006, 5:58:21 PM
Well, not to mock your friend, but has society come to believing that anyone who expresses emotion is 'EMO'? What the fuck does that even mean? Emotional? ALL Art and ALL Music has emotion. Stupid little labels...

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Take a look at my Sculptures.
Emotive Surrealism. You know you want it.
I also make Musicians, too.